雅思大作文主体拓展

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（一）、举例论证(Exemplification)

Sample 1：亚洲国家正以惊人的速度变得西方化.以中国为例,当青少年去看电影的时候,他们 一般都选择好莱坞大片而不选择国产电影.

范文 1：The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is common for them to choose Hollywood blockbusters over domestic films.

Sampler 2：谈大学教育的两大功能：就业与求知

范文 2：To begin with, it is really helpful for university students to be taught some job-related skills that have already become a major focus of higher education. A typical example can be found in the effort to develop their interpersonal skills now required by a growing number of companies as one of the most essential qualities of any job candidate.

句型：An interesting / striking / typical example of„ is provided by the story of sb. who…

Sample 3：动物是人类的朋友.例如，海豚经常从沉船里营救船员.

范文 3：Animals are human’s companions. To illustrate, dolphins often rescue sailors from sinking ships.

Sample 4：大量证据表明，破裂家庭的子女出现情感、行为障碍或触犯法律的可能性是完整

家庭子女的 2～3 倍。

范文 4：A large body of evidence proves that children from broken families are two or three times as likely as those in intact families to have emotional or behavioral problems or get into trouble with the law.

Sampler 5：个人教育与社会发展之间的关系（特别是）

范文 5：Decent education for every individual contributes significantly to the overall well-being of society, especially/particularly when their personal achievements amount to a driving force of social progress.

Sampler 6：学生的学习压力（特别强调）

范文 6：It is not uncommon that school teachers nowadays tend to exert undue academic pressure on young students, with particular emphasis on consistently good performance in all sorts of tests and examinations.

Sampler 7：这点可以通过 „ 来说明

Sampler 7：It is evident from the information supplied that male are far more likely to commit crimes. This point can be illustrated/emphasized by the fact that male offenders accounted for 96% of prison inmates.

（二）、引用论证

思路：引用“科学证据、研究成果、学术刊物、统计数据”

Sample ：员工和雇主能否都获益于“在家上班”

范文：There is some incontrovertible to suggest that both employees and employers can benefit a lot from the growing trend of telecommuting. According to a recent article published in the world-famous Nature Journal, while the average telecommuter can save a considerable portion of their travel expenses, it is estimated that their companies can cut operational costs by almost one third if 25% of the staff are allowed to work at home.

句型：

0 According to a recent article published in the world-famous Time Magazine, …

0 According to a recent survey conducted by a group of American researchers of the 

University of Chicago, …

（三）、递进论证

模板：To begin with → In the second place → Lastly

Sample 1：科学研究应由政府还是私人机构开展

范文 1： There are many reasons for entrusting scientific research to the governments rather than private companies. [支持 1]To begin with, many large-scale and long-term research projects require substantial funding that only national governments can afford. [支持 2]In the second place, first-rate scientists who enjoy international reputation are largely concentrated in government-sponsored research institutions. [ 支 持 3]Lastly, since most private companies are profit-orientated, the findings and conclusions from their research are more likely to be skewed or biased and even represent the interests of a small group.

剖析：

支持 1：大型、长期的研究项目需要大量的资金，通常只有政府有这样的财力； 

支持 2：一流科学家大量集中在由政府资助的研究机构中；

支持 3：私人机构大都以利益为导向，故而得出的结果可能是歪曲或带有偏见的，甚至代表某些小团体的利益。

注意：

不要用 Last but not least，否则引起考官反感，直接用 Lastly 即可!

句型：（适用说明缺点）

0 One major problems/advantage/measure of

0 Another big risk/benefit/sound approach is that„„ 

Furthermore, there is a third undesirable development